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My Day

With my pen in hand I write of the morning sun As the dew sparkles. Sitting on the porch On an early afternoon Watching as blue birds fly away into the night sky as I go rest my head for the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/26/2011 11:12:00 PM
a very well done poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/26/2011 4:23:00 PM
such attention to details.. i am beguiled, cory by the flow and pacing of this one moment in a time..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/26/2011 4:15:00 PM
Very nice Cory, yes it has a soothing quality to it, that I love and thanks for your ever support of me and my poetry~~
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Date: 8/25/2011 8:23:00 PM
Very, very nice..soothing. BG
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:41:00 PM
A lovely time. Good write, enjoyed the read.
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:22:00 PM
Simply a beautiful day. Peace be with you, on your way. In all the weeks and years to come. May God's soft rain meter your drum.
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very interesting poetry today Cory. Love, Carol
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