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My Daughter's Love

My Daughter's Love A warm smile on a perfectly shaped face Eyes wide like the sky - only they make me feel I can fly! Hands so gentle – they put at peace my mental Their warm embrace is soft and smooth like lace. They debate like loud crashing waves in a lake With ever forgiving voices – that make my heart think twice Before and after making all choices. My girls give their love with meticulous precision This helps guide me in making unselfish decisions. To me – living means giving to them my all For without them, my peace, my love, my life Mean nothing at all… For my daughters Alaya & Saen - I LOVE YOU! Mom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/13/2011 6:54:00 AM
Good morning Lay, and how was your mothers day.. also Congratulations on your featured poem this week... a wonderful poem,,, take care and God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Lay. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Walayee
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:09:00 PM
Congrats Lay on your featured poem this week on P.S... a wonderful write to share with us all my friend with luv...on this special day of luv..
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Date: 12/27/2010 1:50:00 PM
Two daughters, twice blessed. Nicely written. Vince
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Date: 12/24/2010 7:29:00 AM
A superb expression of unconditional love for your daughters that you have penned here Lay!! There is nothing like the love a mother has for her children. Thanks so much for sharing this exquisite write. God Bless~Mary~
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Date: 12/3/2010 5:19:00 AM
An exquisite love poem Lay!This love of yours is where it's at! well written. Wish more people could express that love to and for their children.
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