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My Daily Struggle

Nobody has really asked me how I'm doing Nobody has really asked if I'm okay Here I am and I'm alone again Don't wanna have to face the day I see the black yet see no colour My sense of purpose I have none These clouds still follow wherever I may roam Will i ever see the sun?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/10/2024 7:19:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 2/5/2016 5:43:00 PM

ben, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 10/4/2015 4:46:00 AM

Deep sad write on depression I do hope the dark clouds lift for you soon - I know people who suffer it is hard to pick yourself up when you feel so low:-( hugs Jan xx