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My Cyber Family

My Cyber family I had no one to speak my heart, Depression had stolen my spark, Could not help emotions flow, Glittering eyes had lost their glow, One fine evening of early sunset, I doomed in Ocean of deep regret, Penned my feelings at poetry soup, Was welcomed by a warm group, Washed away in tears was grief, Cyber family touched me deep, My feelings as I penned to post, Within no time came hugs of support, Critical comments gave me a go, brainy ones blew away the sorrow, Contests kept me occupied, Negative thoughts were put aside, Exquisite pens mesmerise, age no bar, Put you to cloud nine and ride the stars, If you too are sad and crazy, Welcome to my cyber family ! Written July 21st, 2015 For contest by Mystic Rose

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Date: 7/24/2015 8:27:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this laudatory poem about your cyber family. Nicely done. And thank you for reading and commenting on an old poem of mine. It was a surprise to see it again. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/22/2015 1:05:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very well written contest entry. Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 2:17:00 AM
Thnx Sara!
Date: 7/22/2015 8:07:00 AM
Upma, your write says it all, the soup keeps on giving, a place where we can reveal our pain and our souls, an exquisite 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, glances . .
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 2:16:00 AM
Thnx BW
Date: 7/22/2015 6:24:00 AM
I liked your poem for the contest. How true we are a family here to support and uplift each other. Best of luck in the contest. A 7. ~~Darlene
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 2:16:00 AM
Thnx Darlene!
Date: 7/21/2015 3:44:00 PM
I remember those same feelings...a feeling of belonging
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 2:16:00 AM
Thnx Tim!
Date: 7/21/2015 10:44:00 AM
Wow! This is so great my dear friend, Dr. Upma. A mutual feeling here! Thank you so much for sharing and being one of the members of my loving cyber family. This poem goes to my fave, and 7+ from me. More pow'r and blessings! love lots, Leonora
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 2:15:00 AM
Thnx Leonora!
Date: 7/21/2015 9:41:00 AM
Oh such positivity, and one i can truly relate to, wonderful poetry..
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 2:15:00 AM
thnx harry

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