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My Misty arrived as a cute bundle of fur With electric blue eyes and a very loud purr She was a birthday present especially for me We’d snuggle up together; she’d sit on my knee Misty’s favourite toy was a clockwork mouse She’d chase this fluffy toy all over the house Kit e cat chunks was her preferred choice of food She’d gobble it up; with her white teeth she chewed On her feet she had black pads and razor sharp claws She was always so careful where she placed her paws! Misty’s silver grey fur was so soft and so warm A great protection for her when out in a storm Over time Misty grew she’d venture out the front door She’d chase after wild birds – pussycats birds abhor! I recall the day Misty left a dead mouse by the door Just a head and entrails (I’d never seen these before) Misty just loves playing and having such fun She adores being outdoors in the heat of the sun Fiction write For the love of kittens Contest Sponsored by Brenda Chiri-Carroll 01~08~17

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Date: 2/7/2017 2:54:00 AM
Loved your awesome write on Misty:) congratulations, Jan:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2017 4:42:00 PM
Many thanks Jo its pure fiction for me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/6/2017 11:26:00 PM
Your Misty is very beautiful. Never seen cats with blue eyes though...Congrats on your win!:)
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Date: 2/8/2017 11:31:00 AM
:))
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2017 4:43:00 PM
Many thanks Sunita I am actually allergic to animal fur so its pure fiction and just a pic from the web:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/6/2017 10:24:00 PM
Came back to congratulate you on your win:)
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Date: 2/7/2017 4:44:00 PM
Many thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/6/2017 8:52:00 PM
Makes me smile! Congrats on your win, Jan! Janice
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Date: 2/7/2017 4:44:00 PM
Many thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/6/2017 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations! I sure enjoyed reading your kitty kitty poem and your baby is beautiful! Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 2/6/2017 2:13:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Jan
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Date: 2/7/2017 4:45:00 PM
Many thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/16/2017 12:34:00 PM
what a wonderful couplet, Jan, a winner already hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thanks Eve I loved the contest prompt:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/11/2017 5:34:00 PM
This is well done Jan. I did think this was your cat, but I see you mentioned fiction. I had a cat named Misty when I was young. I could relate to this. :)
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Date: 1/13/2017 6:43:00 PM
Yes pure fiction for me Heidi but I'm glad that you could relate:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/10/2017 2:43:00 PM
I really enjoyed this couplet, it's absolutely purrrrrrfect, good luck Jan.
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Date: 1/11/2017 3:51:00 PM
aww thanks for the cute comment Roy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2017 8:41:00 PM
Nice tribute to your cat - I had a cat named Bilbo for many years - and I miss her. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2017 2:19:00 AM
Pure fiction write for me Matthew I have an allergy to cat fur:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2017 3:25:00 PM
Misty is a lucky pet...she has a lovely and understanding mistress! Enjoyed these delightful couplets, Jan. Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/9/2017 6:11:00 PM
Pure poetic licence Paul sadly I have an allergy to animal fur:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2017 2:02:00 PM
Beautiful write Jan...an adorable cat...hugs
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Date: 1/9/2017 6:11:00 PM
Isn't it a wonderful picture - i wish it was for real for me but sadly I have an allergy to animal fur:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2017 9:12:00 AM
Great couplet about a fictional cat. I'm convinced the cat is wearing contact lenses. A Fav.
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Date: 1/9/2017 12:13:00 PM
Aren;t those blue eyes stunning Armand - kitty contacts ... if they aren't created already you are on to a winner with that idea!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2017 6:14:00 AM
Love It!
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:09:00 AM
aww thanks Judy I had fun writing this poem I'm delighted to see your comment:- hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2017 6:39:00 PM
OMG, with those royal blue eyes. So beaustiful! Very nicely written, Jan :)
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Date: 1/9/2017 1:03:00 AM
pure fiction for me Akkina but wow what eyes that cat has:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2017 6:20:00 PM
very cutely done, Jan. I don't suppose you really had a Misty, but wow, what a gorgeous cat picture this is!
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2017 1:02:00 AM
No Misty in my life just poetic licence and mine is a due for a review lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2017 1:58:00 PM
Love those eyes... Amazing Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/8/2017 2:35:00 PM
Isn't she cute ... I found the pic on the web after I'd written the poem - that's the way I usually write :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2017 1:25:00 PM
Cute poem, Jan. My mom is the cat lover. Buddy loves to chase them:)
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Date: 1/8/2017 1:30:00 PM
I know how much you adore your lovely Buddy - i can imagine the scene of him in pursuit lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/8/2017 12:37:00 PM
A really lovely poem, Jan. I hope it does well in the Contest. // Barry.
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Date: 1/8/2017 12:43:00 PM
Thanks Barry I enjoyed the theme we were given:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2017 12:21:00 PM
Fun poem, Jan. Sorry to hear about your allergy :( Good luck in the contest! Agnes
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/8/2017 12:42:00 PM
We had kittens and cats when I was growing up by I have an allergy to their fur which has got worse over the years so I can't have a cat:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2017 11:54:00 AM
- A happy kitten ... a lovely and sweet poem, Jan (Wonderful eyes !!!!) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/8/2017 11:56:00 AM
Oh I would love a cat Anne Lise but I'm allergic to their fur:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2017 11:13:00 AM
So true of kitties!
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Date: 1/8/2017 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Sunlite it is many years since we owned a pet so this is a fictional write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2017 10:47:00 AM
What a sweet write about your kitty. I love watching kitties play and have fun. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/8/2017 11:56:00 AM
Thanks Dane Ann:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2017 10:19:00 AM
Awe What a great write. Poor burds and mouse. Cute but deadly just like me. ha ha. Well done. Pete
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/8/2017 11:57:00 AM
lol thanks Peter:-) hugs Jan xx

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