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My Crush

Her brown eyes glance into mine and stuns me; My heart freezes, seduced by her elegance. I glance back at her; making my heart flee, As it fears bursting due to her presence. She sweeps her flowing, brown hair to the side, And my heart tightens from what it has seen. Her beauty hits me and I want to hide. My heart wants her love and I too was keen. But my ambition wasn’t to take place; My presence does not bring light to her core, I am a peasant trying to make my case. And she is a queen that seeks something more Perhaps my crush on her is quite insane, But how do I rid myself of the pain?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/2/2015 11:52:00 PM
Hi Jackson, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/1/2015 11:16:00 PM
Jackson Thao, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2015 2:26:00 PM
Think many of us can relate to the emotions in your words:-) hugs janxx
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