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My Couplet Morning

as the morning light show, the burning candle i blow then comes the morning kiss that makes me feel i'm in trance the morning prayer i say, to set the pace for the day. later on the morning push up, that makes the blood rush up. then the kitchen door i open, to put the food in the oven. and i set out in pleasure, to catch the day treasure. 6th August, '12 Modupe Sefunmi

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Date: 8/12/2012 7:38:00 PM
Enjoyed your couplet morning. All the best in the contest and thanks for your comment.
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:15:00 PM
This is really cool. I like how you used short lines and told precisely your morning routine!!
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Date: 8/7/2012 2:39:00 PM
Nice and wonderful couplets,Modupe.wishing you luck in the contest.Thanks for stopping by and for the comments...XOXO..
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Date: 8/7/2012 7:33:00 AM
Sweet! A perfect way to start the day...BG
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