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My Coming of Age

I wasn’t young – but not that old I looked down – my blood ran cold I spied a single little hair That yesterday just wasn’t there I thought to show it to my mother But thinking that just made me shudder I don’t think she would understand After all she’s not a man I’d show it to the guys I know But they’d just laugh so that’s no-go I don’t want to wait till I get more Though I’m sure there’s more in store So I’m turning to my friends on Soup At least those in my own age group And hope that one of them will care To hear about my grey chest hair Mdailey 2/7/12 For Frank Herra's Coming of Age Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2012 9:19:00 PM
MIKE
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:13:00 PM
very funny! i love the clever surprise at the end.
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Date: 2/27/2012 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations in the"Coming Of Age" contest Mike. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2012 9:38:00 AM
cxongrats Mike on an amazimg win for this excellent entry and creative write luv..
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Date: 2/7/2012 8:30:00 PM
This is too funny, Mike! thanks for the laugh! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:01:00 PM
hahahahaha. VERY GOOD, Mike. For a minute there I thought the guy wanting a play date was maybe only 12 years old!!!
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