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My Christmas Souvenir

The sledding and the skating in ‘63; the sugar cookies frosted green and red; the stringing popcorn with my family and going anxiously that Eve to bed. The gift exchange when relatives would meet. Some traveled far to Grandma's little town. The feast and seeing cousins  such a treat! We stayed and played until the sun went down. The program at our church where all took part. Our flock was small but talent did not lack. The joyous songs; before we would depart; the glorious sweets dispensed from Santa's sack! No holiday to come could be as dear as when I was a child in my eighth year! For the "Christmas Past, Present or Future" Poetry contest of Kelly Deschler (This was also the year my mother met my stepdad and we became a family of 9 instead of 5. A standout year, but also reminiscent of many of my childhood years at Christmas time in Iowa. With so many dear relatives now passed on, the past would be my time I would choose to revisit.)

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Date: 12/30/2014 3:07:00 AM
lovely insight into the child you were Andrea gl in contest and H.N.Y. hugs
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Date: 12/30/2014 12:22:00 AM
Nice one Andrea :) Happy New Year !
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Date: 12/27/2014 2:27:00 PM
excellent pen as always andrea i pray you had a beautiful christmas wishing you a happy new year
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Date: 12/27/2014 1:41:00 PM
I truly enjoyed this and it took me back to better times, in memory.
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Date: 12/26/2014 5:14:00 AM
You truly do bring the memories back for us the reader.. Andrea, although in a faraway land, the scene you describe in your wonderful poem could have been here in the yorkshire dales, and no doubt many other poets reading this could say the same, wherever they may be..Have a wonderful festive season, you bring us such joy with your poetry../.
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Date: 12/26/2014 1:21:00 AM
This is another beautiful Christmas poem to read from you my dearest friend Andrea. Thank you, thank you so much for sharing! Stopping by to greet you and your loved ones A very Merry Christmas! Wish you all the best this season! Sorry for being late. My flu was prolonged and I visited my doctor this morning so I just came back home. Sending you warm Christmas hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/25/2014 8:55:00 PM
Andrea, your recollection of memories is priceless,may you continue to make many more, lovely write! Merry Christmas! Hugs
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Date: 12/25/2014 7:37:00 PM
Thanks sis, you brought all of my memories of Christmas in Iowa back. I miss being young and having fun in Iowa with you and all of the family.
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Date: 12/25/2014 10:34:00 AM
This gem makes me think of my own souvenirs. I still feel rotten, but wanted to post something for Christmas morn. This poem was a typical, a tribute to my mom. Merry Christmas my dear friend. Love, daver
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Date: 12/25/2014 9:54:00 AM
Felt like I was there with you, great memories, great write, love it, a fav! Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/25/2014 8:01:00 AM
At this time of year family memories are flowing...Merry Christmas to you and your family Andrea...hugs Tim
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Date: 12/25/2014 5:59:00 AM
Nicely structured poem. Good meter; makes it an easy read. All the very best to you, Andrea, at this joyous time of year. A very merry Christmas! :-) john.
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Date: 12/24/2014 11:05:00 PM
Great memories, great poem! Merry Christmas Andrea
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Date: 12/24/2014 8:53:00 PM
Wishing you and yours a blessed and Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/24/2014 7:26:00 PM
Hello Andrea,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/24/2014 7:08:00 PM
a lovely memory, andrea! hope you'll have a wonderful christmas this year, too!
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Date: 12/24/2014 5:39:00 PM
Andrea, this is a wonderful Sonnet about your Christmas past. It is amazing how these childhood special memories stay with us, and the recall of them is so sweet and special...like jewels that linger in our thoughts. GL for the contest. Sandra
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Date: 12/24/2014 4:56:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Family centered fun and sharing is wonderful..Thanks for reading and considering my work in your contest..Sara
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Date: 12/24/2014 4:48:00 PM
Other than the skating, reminded me of some Christmases past. Nicely done.
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Date: 12/24/2014 3:24:00 PM
You make me almost wanna cry Andrea. Being of a family of 7 kids, I too long to revisit those times. May God's grace grace your holidays this year. Peace. :)
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Date: 12/24/2014 2:46:00 PM
beautiful souvenirs of the season, andie... have a glorious Christmas with huggs
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Date: 12/24/2014 11:49:00 AM
beautiful memories Andrea - that is all we have left my friend:-( good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/24/2014 11:11:00 AM
Sweet memories of Christmas...I, too, miss those simpler times. Hugs, Rhonda
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