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My Childs Fight

Through the screams and suffering My worst fears are foretold And if the story were not mine I’d leave it left untold Why could it not be me? That fate I could bear But as it isn’t I’m left to doubt What my hands cannot repair Despite this state of helplessness I feel but the fingertips of despair In the focus of life’s cruel gaze I’m awed by courage unaware From that tiny heart unconquered I do not falter or lose control For I see no strength in Death’s hand That can clutch this unwilling soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/7/2016 2:17:00 AM
CHRIS, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/29/2016 10:50:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Chris. linda
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Date: 8/3/2011 2:47:00 PM
Wow,this is a fantastic piece of art. I have never read such depth in words. Very talented soul,congrats.
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Date: 8/2/2011 8:51:00 PM
Congrats Chris on this one being featured. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Chris. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Chris. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2010 12:01:00 PM
so devastating! well written
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:32:00 AM
interesting Chris, very deep as it is written,, enjoyed the poem,, and welcome to the soup,..p.d.
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Date: 11/28/2010 5:35:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chris. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2010 8:32:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup is fun and fantastic.. enjoy a happy weekend with luv..
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