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My Childs Addiction...

My child's addiction By John B Scott Is this what you really want ? Numbing your pain with pills and booze A little girl with ballerina dreams But addiction is what you choose. A beautiful girl with hope in her heart Scarred from mans indecent ways Abused and used shame took your fight Life's truths have torn you apart. Sobriety awaits for you my dear Reach out your hand and try I will be with you through thick and thin My daughter the apple of my eye.

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John Loving Iii

Date: 2/5/2010 3:58:00 PM

patience. very well writen. John H Loving III

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/8/2010 10:19:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup John. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Andrew Roza

Date: 1/6/2010 6:38:00 AM

Great poem you told the story well of dreams and growing up. nice going on this one keep it up!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/5/2010 4:47:00 PM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets .. may your stay be a long one ... and may your new year be filled with blessings... luv... creativeness.. friendships.. health... and great poetry like this delight... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/5/2010 3:52:00 PM

Nicely presented write. That is a very difficult situation for parents, grandparents, other relatives, and close friends of the family in this situation. Addiction is terrible for the person because it turns them into someone they are not. They are controlled by the drug of choice. Their life is no longer their own. If this is a fact and not a topic I feel for you. It takes a want to change on the part of the person that is addicted and hard work. It is a lifetime illness. Keep writing.