My Child

I'll never hold you in my arms, I will never see you grow, I'll never wipe your tears away I'll never see you play, I'll never see you smile or talk I'll never see you walk, But you will always be with me always in my thoughts.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2014 4:58:00 PM

Samantha, Congratulations, In Regina's "Special Memory" contest..... Have a nice one, LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2014 4:41:00 PM

such a sad write:-( I can think of nothing worse than the loss of a child my heart goes out to you. Hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2014 9:44:00 PM

this is a sad one. sorry for your loss.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2014 5:45:00 AM

Congrats on the win with touchy write, Samantha

Samantha Cook
Date: 9/19/2014 7:17:00 AM

Thank u x

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/25/2014 4:55:00 PM

That's very touching and sad. I hope you have a good week, despite the loss. .. . :( great rhythm! ~DWB

Daver Austin

Date: 11/8/2012 3:19:00 PM

Short and rather bittersweet. Congrats on the selection. daver

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 11/7/2012 8:58:00 AM

I' lost a child also. I never saw him walk He would have been 42. Yes, thoughts never fade. Congrats on your featured poem. Very heartfelt. God Bless, and hugs, Prouder

Samantha Cook
Date: 11/7/2012 10:07:00 AM

Sorry to hear about your lost x

Patricia Ellis

Date: 11/7/2012 5:05:00 AM

So sad and from the heart..congrats on your featured poem ~ Pat

Samantha Cook
Date: 11/7/2012 10:08:00 AM

Thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/6/2012 6:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your outstanding poetry being featured this week Samantha. Love, Carol

Samantha Cook
Date: 11/6/2012 6:39:00 AM

thats so sweet thank you

David Scott

Date: 11/1/2012 5:44:00 PM

lovely wriote mate nice pattern and emotion here xx davidscott

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2012 2:03:00 PM

You write really well - thank you for sharing your poem. - Welcome to P-Soup, have fun with poems. :) Hope your weekend will be beautiful!! Anne-Lise :)

Samantha Cook
Date: 10/26/2012 3:13:00 PM

Thank you x