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My Chick

You’re skin and bones, chick. Compassion commands me stop, stare, on my path, where you sleep. I see dryness, hear stillness, feel silence. You’re skin and bones, chick. Were your chirps for worms silenced in unsound Mother’s ears? Your wings, too weak, too still, on your first, failed, flight? Your plume-less limbs Coverless in cold night? Uncovered corpse, bony chick. No shore water to wash away your undug green grave in a low, lonely juniper. My eyes wash me in salt water. I have a path; yours ends here your bones sinking, my brain soaring. Which frightened robin, fleeing my footsteps, was your misguided mother? So unlike mine, who saw her child, underfed, and said, “You’re skin and bones, my chick.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/14/2014 9:39:00 PM
Alexandra, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 8/12/2014 9:27:00 AM
Like the theme,this is well written..
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:29:00 PM
Alexandra, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/25/2014 5:52:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Alexandra:) - I choose your first very great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/24/2014 10:54:00 PM
Hi Alexandra, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~
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