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My Cage

I remember being always in your sight Running with speed of deer Untouchable in a fair race. I remember hearing your foot steps A symphony to me Like wind carries The smell of a forest. I remember when I was set free Ocean runs in my blood My cage still unbroken Cold in weeping fog.

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Date: 2/23/2009 4:45:00 PM
This comes under the category of things that make you go "hmmmm" which can be a good thing. I was with you till the last verse."Ocean runs in my blood My cage still unbroken" first I'm a fish then a bird? "hmmmmmmm" then a "x" in the fog? Oh well, I have to think harder! Light & Love Debbie
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