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My Brother My Friend

Remember the day that I tied my shoe lace, You said "Mum I done it", lied straight to her face. Remember the res where I nearly went down, You jumped in, clothes on, your face such a frown. Remember the rabbit we pulled out of it's hole, you knew from that moment, that was your goal. Remember the boy who pulled my blond hair, You growled and you hissed, wow you gave him a scare. Remember the disco, the rocks and the punks, And when the nights done we were fighting in chunks. Remember my marriage, you disliked him so, "What are you doing?, that man has to go." Remember the shop, we would laugh at the folk, You'd read your paper, I would just talk. Remember, remember the life that we shared, I'm now on my own, I'm a little bit scared.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/3/2010 8:21:00 PM
Nostalgic and a bit sad. I hope he is not far away! congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/1/2010 7:57:00 PM
A fine rhyming with repetitive words. I enjoyed the poem
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Date: 4/1/2010 6:42:00 PM
Awesome big brother no doubt Carolyne. I loved your rhymes. "CONGRATULATIONS" AND THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/1/2010 2:55:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem in Moses contest.. a wonderful write and win for u to so enjoy...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/29/2010 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carolyne. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2010 9:25:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your dear brother, Carolyne...A wonderful memory to cherish...I wrote about my brother Brian Emil Carey who past quite a while ago and my memories of him are still fresh in my mind...Goes to my favs! Peace, love, audrey
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