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My Brother

You left my brother Came back a man Should hear our proud father Speak of you How you’ve done him And momma proud Sister Jane and Katherine Down the block Never seem to have anything But you to talk about Oh if you only knew the loving All the girls around here Say you’ve missed It’s a good bet You’d never have left But leave you did Nothing can change that now In a way it’s good to know Exactly where you are We need never again worry If that old truck of yours broke down Leaving you to walk home in the rain It’s a good thing really Now we can all get some sleep Granted, not as much as you But we will in our due time Just want you to know These tags of yours Will never leave my neck You, will never leave my heart For no matter why you left Or how you came back You still are And will always be My brother

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/29/2010 8:31:00 AM
Might also add that in honor of all those who have sacrificed so that we might live free, my last five postings as well as my next two are paying tribute and giving thanks to those who selflessly gave that we might be blessed. It is my hope that each time we see our flag or hear our national athem we give pause and show respect for all those who can no longer do so for themselves. May God bless and keep them all :)
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Date: 5/29/2010 8:19:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words Constance. This piece was actually written in part for a friend of mine whose brother is currently serving undercover and his fears for the brother's return and in part for all brothers who have been lost. I have been among the forunate ones never to lose a brother. It is my hope the day comes soon when no more brothers are lost :)
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:02:00 AM
Mike, I am brushing my tears away, after reading this heartwrenching poem. It is so sad, and so beautiful at the same time. I am truley sorry for your loss of a brother. It is clear how much he was loved. Constance
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Date: 5/28/2010 12:28:00 PM
Heartfelt tribute to a loved one / brother.. Enjoyed, thanks for sharing ~ rgds Wilma
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Date: 5/28/2010 12:15:00 PM
Thanks Chris :) I fear far too many brothers have been lost over the years eh...
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