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"my Brother"

He is sweet, he is cute Though he sometimes looks like rude. He is my little bro(brother), a reason to smile Inspires me always to go thousand miles. He calls me always and makes fool of me Then I get mad and scold him with the reason I see I sometimes wish, he wouldn't have called Then I realize-without him I'm nothing, not at all He is my little kid and my best pal He is the brother which I could never had. He always makes us happy, makes us proud I feel free being with him, also in crowd. He has lots of girlfriends with hit lists Annu and Pragya – also in list. For him BINA is the best of all Hey!!!!!!!!!! don't get confuse he has more. Yesterday, I asked about poem to write He then laughed and suddenly became quite. He would solve equation rather, he said If he writes one, he'll mess-that I can bet. He is tall and is black When I reach home, he hides behind rack Making me search him everywhere See, can you find such an stupid anywhere?????????? Throwing pranks and jokes on me Always makes him excitedly happy. No matter how much he teases me He has always been very special to me. Operating computer makes him dumb Gets stick with it all the time, like the gum. Neither he listens me nor of mom To make him wake up, I know-always need a nuclear bomb. Go on my brother, you go on……… Life is waiting-saying come on Still a long way waiting for you But, remember always, There's a sister praying for you. -I have written and dedicated this poem for my sweet little brother, NITESH. He is my best friend too and this donkey(my brother) means everything to me. he always makes me cry coz of his love and care. No one can ever be like him. Thanks for being my sweet little brother,dear. Your sister loves you so much…………. Love Renu....

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Date: 2/28/2016 8:24:00 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:18:00 AM
renu, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:59:00 PM
Renu,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 9/3/2009 1:34:00 AM
simple and sweet poem. siblings are sometimes needed to fight and to share.
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Date: 8/21/2009 3:13:00 AM
this poem is a pearl to the one who can recieve it-- and so you have.this poem is about a father who has a daughter and is holding her tightly as he dances with her-- he looks up with tears in his eyes and praises God for his joy.the music is for you Renu. there now we have shared bread. with love.....o
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Date: 8/19/2009 5:46:00 AM
Renu, what a dedication. Excellent. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2009 5:10:00 AM
I think that its ridiculous, nonsense.... to backbite on person who is as decent as sailor(Nitesh). I'm gonna case about that. He he just kidding Anyway, I am proud to say that i have sister like u and wanna thank God to give sister like my dear monkey sis. A journey of thousand steps starts from a single step. Go ahead my sis life is waiting before u and be sure that ur bro is always behind u. I bless u in the behalf of HIM ha haha
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Date: 8/19/2009 3:15:00 AM
you are so rich in love my friend-- you make me a beggar: come let us sit,... you and i... at Gods table, and we will share the bread we are given your new friend in USA o
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