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My brother

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This is a poem for my brother who took his life Because of depression. Some times you cannot see what's in front of you.

You asked me for my help But I did not understand. You reached out for my help But I did not take your hand. You wrote you needed help But I did not read your letter. You told me you were sick But I did nothing to make it better. You asked me for my help But I made you wait. By the time I was ready to help You were gone I was to late.

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Deb M

Date: 11/19/2023 3:33:00 PM

Oh Paul….your poem is so honest and l have complete respect for you for that. It wouldn't have been easy to write that. Im so sorry you lost your brother to suicide Paul…..l hope regret or guilt are not consuming you! Take care …Debx

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/11/2023 3:36:00 PM

This is sad indeed, Paul. I am sorry for your loss and your anguish.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/11/2023 1:52:00 PM

oh, I felt the sadness and regret in your poem, Paul. Your poem touched me deeply, for I, too, lost my younger brother who took his own life. I just didn't understand his struggle, didn't know how to help him. Now, I can't--a regret that's sometimes hard to handle. Thanks for sharing your words, have a good evening, Sara