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My Brain Complains It's Underpaid

So what silly notion has taken over today? My brain works independently, I don't have a say I do draw the line And start to whine When my brain tries to claim it's seriously underpaid © Jack Ellison 2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 4/22/2015 5:59:00 AM

Just for being the most senior, I think it deserves a raise...lol! Who among those in your bracket can be as charming and witty, er...silly as this brain of yours? You should seriously consider you know...it might stage a protest! lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/22/2015 6:27:00 AM

LOL! One thing this old brain and I concur on, YOU, my dear Kimmie, are a real sweetie!!! You'll be the first to know if it stages a protest! Huggsies, Jack xxx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/22/2015 3:35:00 AM

I love your brain, filled with all those silly notions! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/22/2015 6:11:00 AM

Of all the sweet ladies I've met here on the Soup, and there are many, you are right up there with the ones I most hold dear! Your kindness makes my heart glow! Loving hugs, Jack xxx

David Fisher

Date: 4/21/2015 9:08:00 PM

This is a fun Limerick. Maybe your body parts have unionized.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/21/2015 9:23:00 PM

As part of management, I will fight this tooth and nail!!!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/21/2015 7:51:00 PM

Blimey young Jack... The doc reckons I couldn't afford the search fees to find my brain. You're right though, the brain as well as other body parts all claim to be overworked and underpaid. Lindsay

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/21/2015 8:23:00 PM

A-N-D my brain works totally on it's own! LOL A pretty smart ass piece of equipment!!!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/21/2015 2:22:00 PM

I had no idea that brains would do such a thing! Hilarious!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/21/2015 5:33:00 PM

Absolutely!!! I'm surprised you didn't know that! LOL xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/21/2015 9:35:00 AM

My Trolls have the same problem so I some times pay them in shiny baubles plus some Jackisms to ponder... and ponder... and ponder... Hey! They're Trolls you know! LOL...

Carol Eastman
Date: 4/21/2015 10:02:00 AM

They do try...

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/21/2015 9:56:00 AM

You mean there's a chance they may understand my silly tomfoolery! LOL xxx