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My Bonny Lass

She wore a tartan bonnet upon her flame red locks, Around her waist she wore a kilt For her no fancy frocks. She puts fire in my veins, I love her so, I do. Oh my bonny, bonny lass My heart I give to you. I'll love you forever, Aye, my lass I will And should I live a thousand years, I shall love you still.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/12/2016 4:57:00 PM
I would agree with Kim, it has an old fashion air to it. Congratulations.
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/12/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thank you Janis :)
Date: 12/10/2016 9:36:00 AM
An old-fashioned poem! So lovely, Gary!
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/10/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 12/9/2016 4:26:00 PM
Just perfect! Sweet to the soul :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/9/2016 5:23:00 PM
Thank you Akkina :)
Date: 12/9/2016 8:48:00 AM
Beautiful Gary, the flame of eternal love, when one sparks that in your heart, it creates a warming wonderful glow. Aye, this were lovely.
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/9/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Chris :)

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