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My Blossoms

When the season of splendor sprinkles the scent of sprightliness, when the koels and kingfishers sing hymns of hope and merrily waltz their wings of chartreuse dreams, and when from her day dream, my muse emerges in ecstasy, I dip my quill in vivid shades of ebullient sacramento ink. When in a gentle stroke, the first ray of the golden prince caresses the myrtle terrain of earth - his beloved princess, and she wakes up from her dark moss slumber blushing and swinging in neon shades of love in a moment of delight as she becomes a pinnacle of rustic beauty sparkling and swaying in shamrock hues, and when the harmonious harp of the buzzing bees wafts in the air as they suck sweet nectar from the brilliant blooms adorning my muse’s verdant malachite rockery adding vivid lime vibrance to the hustle and bustle of the grassy gorgeous flower beds dispensing the aroma of exuberant pistachio thoughts of my reasoning - and becomes a harbinger of hope for my creative quill, I passionately let my avocado ink to pen its inspiring pearls of perception. When my muse ponders on the fragility of life fraught with hindrances and hiatuses for progress, yet wonders on how life advances and ascends in the rungs of optimism - like buds finding way to bloom even in a pit of rocky soil: my ink blossoms in the tender glow of my lilac dreams of love and peace.

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Date: 1/3/2024 11:51:00 AM
This lovely poem didnt place? This wasn't really a contest, but an opportunity to showcase an Na poem.. Nice to see you taking part dear..
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/3/2024 11:19:00 PM
Anyways, that wasn't the first time I was noticing such duplicitous attitude from sponsors here while judging poems. You know something? I've learnt long back to grow a thicker skin and receive all my NAs with a smile....lol...~ Ani
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/3/2024 11:17:00 PM
Thank you so much dear S1.Yes it didn't place. Actually I wrote this for one of your contests, unfortunately I couldn't enter at that time. Then, I entered it for another contest but got NA.
Date: 12/27/2023 10:08:00 AM
Did this make the winner list? Sure hope so, Ani.
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Date: 12/15/2023 10:47:00 AM
"My Blossoms" is an amazing write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. I wish you would write more. Have a blessed day.......................
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Date: 11/25/2023 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/3/2023 6:15:00 AM
Thank you so very dear friend. I remember, I saw your name, though I didn't purchase the book. Hearty congratulations to you too... dear talented poetess... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 11/2/2023 6:34:00 AM
Brilliant writing. I just love this. God bless you sweet friend, much love, Gina
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Date: 10/27/2023 8:17:00 PM
"pistachio thoughts of my reasoning", "inspiring pearls of perception", "lilac dreams of love and peace" - You have a very beautifully convincing way of writing. This too is great work.
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Date: 10/10/2023 12:05:00 PM
Dear sweet Ani- what a glorious, exquisite poem that blossoms with boundless imagery, alliterations and so much more. What a talent you are. How creative you are. So many gorgeous lines. The last verse, in particular, is truly wonderful,’ like buds finding way to bloom’ ‘ my ink blossoms in the tender glow’. So deep and profound. Loved it. Thank you for sharing. Love and hugs to you dear poetic friend. :):)
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Date: 10/8/2023 1:19:00 PM
wow, you deserve a BIG win for this, my friend. You are such a talent, my friend.
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Date: 10/7/2023 9:55:00 PM
Oh my, the imagery and metaphorical wordsmithery here has truly captivated my soul! Your words flow in the most enchanting way, weaving very evocative depths in an artistic manner.. Your use of alliteration, metaphors, various colours and impeccable diction has truly painted a tapestry, one to admire and adore! There are so many amazing lines here especially the ending where you said even through the fragile phases of life, the bud of life finds its sunshine and blooms in love, peace & optimism
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/7/2023 9:55:00 PM
Absolutely a Fav for me really, I enjoyed reading this and so good to read your poems, sending you so much love :)
Date: 10/7/2023 8:45:00 AM
Wow i see your use of metaphors and similes and imagery here , is another level, i think silent one will love this, you’ve used so many various shades of colors in such a creative manner. I especially love neon and pistachio and also the ending is so beautiful and artistic! So many brilliant lines so well crafted and is so fitting for the theme! My heart is full, reading about the flowers blooming and the musically pleasing wordplay! That truly touches every sense in sheer eloquence! A fave
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/7/2023 9:37:00 PM
Oh no you should enter it to new poem contest, im sure this will win. Love it beautiful Poetess
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2023 9:19:00 PM
Dear ink, am in awe of your kindness and ability to give such inspiring comments straight from your heart for poems of mine and everyone in Soup. Thank you so much dear beautiful friend for your kind words of appreciation of my poem. I couldn't enter this for S1's contest as it got filled up before I could enter Haha... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/6/2023 5:22:00 PM
Your vibrant descriptions flow as I read your poetry, Ani. The imagery is astounding, and I can see your excitement as you muse interacts with your quill. Good luck in the contest, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2023 9:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Bill for the visit and your kind words of appreciation for my poem. I didn't enter this for the contest. God bless... ~ Ani

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