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My Bitter Sweet Dance With a Stranger

She rotates under the balance of my hands sweet memories we derive unfamiliar dance steps, mistakes already reaching five but with the reception of her smile, I thrive. The stream of her tender archive into it I completely dive even when our minds sometimes disagree with the jive mysteriously to our pleasure, both hearts connive. Gradually clicking and stepping the motion is set, we drive our bodies, dependent on each other like the bee and its hive envious cohesion, sweet emotions and heated passions we unconsciously contrive our heartbeat, impulses and gazes taking over despite the melody of the music so alive. The licks of our skins and my loan of her waist are taking this dance to a level we won’t survive a lot in both minds which all stimulate and also deprive. Our thoughts so secretive yet having one loud voice as we strive the gossip of my body rhythm says it all “I am so ready to swive” The bell of caution rings my senses and morality revive as the sign of a “no trespass” is conspicuous on her delightful finger.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/11/2015 1:47:00 AM
Bravo...this is a nice sensual piece...xx
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Funom Makama
Date: 12/17/2015 4:47:00 AM
Thank u so much my friend... Its been a long while. How are you?
Date: 2/9/2015 12:31:00 PM
Hot and sensual...nicely penned! :) john.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/10/2015 6:03:00 AM
Thank you my friend!
Date: 2/6/2015 7:23:00 AM
The poem is great so full of emotion and imagry. I Love the phrase at the finish "As the sign of no trespass". love Shane xxx
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2015 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Shane Cooper
Date: 2/6/2015 4:59:00 AM
wow excellent imaginary love how you penned this piece dear friend
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2015 6:38:00 AM
Thank you so much liam
Date: 2/5/2015 3:49:00 PM
I was on the edge of my seat...now I know shy...that ring was quite an awakening.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/6/2015 6:37:00 AM
yeah.. You are right Kiser... Thanks a lot for your comment
Date: 2/3/2015 3:52:00 PM
love the imagery in the poem Funom - you lead us on a merry dance when we discover the ring on the finger at the end - great twist - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/5/2015 12:44:00 PM
oh Jan... hank you! Thank you! Thank you and thank you very much!

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