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My Birthday Bones

September birthday sticks may, stones definitely... never throw sapphire! For "Flowers or Stones" contest sponsored by Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver.

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Date: 1/21/2012 9:28:00 PM

congrats George on a terrific win for a superb entry luv..

Date: 1/19/2012 9:44:00 PM

haha, I had to pause to think about this one and then GOT it. Congrats on your clever senryu.

Date: 1/19/2012 7:41:00 PM

nice senryu - love the title and how it adds to this piece. congrats on your win!

Date: 1/19/2012 8:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win George

Date: 1/19/2012 8:01:00 AM

Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest George. Love, Carol

Date: 1/19/2012 7:03:00 AM

A cute senryu !! Congrats on your placement in the contest !!

Date: 1/17/2012 8:41:00 PM

George... good luck in the contest...p.d.

Date: 1/15/2012 2:43:00 PM

I haven't checked the contest out so I don't know what it is about but reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed..Sara