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My Biggest Mistake

where's mistake perhaps i have found without loving my heart can't live sound i never hurt any one as i know and think misunderstanding may cause due to missing link i am suspected and sometimes i am blamed without any fault many times i am ashamed i know i am very simple and God believer i love all so i am inflicted in to brain fever though love is my biggest mistake ever i find this mistake rebuilds me and gives me peace of mind Written on: 2nd July 2016

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Date: 8/18/2016 9:13:00 AM
There is such infinite depth to your heart and your gift to move people so profoundly with your beautiful words is a testament to the power of a generous, illuminating, extraordinary mind. May love and faith sustain you in times of uncertainty.:-) Fantastic writing, a pleasure to read. blessings, lynn
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Bl Devnath
Date: 8/18/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful uplifting comment my friend. Praying to God always for all and may Supreme most God bless us all so that we can hear Him in true sense. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Date: 7/25/2016 5:34:00 PM
Bl, I really don't see you making too many mistakes. I realize none of us are perfect but you have such a kind heart any mistake you may have made was purely unintentional I'm sure. I think this poem proves my point. Enjoyed reading you today.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/25/2016 9:21:00 PM
Thanks for your comment my friend. Hugs, bl
Date: 7/8/2016 7:37:00 PM
I know you to have a kind heart, and any mistakes made in the past, would not be of your own making. Life is so full of unintentional misunderstands. A Wonderful Poem !!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/9/2016 11:35:00 AM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your appreciation. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/8/2016 9:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win! :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/8/2016 10:31:00 AM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/8/2016 8:56:00 AM
BL, I fell in love with this, just superb...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/8/2016 10:30:00 AM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for giving placement of my poem in the contest and for your appreciation with lovely wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/6/2016 5:24:00 PM
Wonderful just wonderful poetry.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/7/2016 12:14:00 PM
Thanks my lovely genius friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/6/2016 4:02:00 PM
BL, good rhymes, interesting poem. Don't sell yourself short, my friend. I'm glad you are a God believer. It's good to hear from you.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/7/2016 12:11:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/3/2016 7:21:00 AM
Gee this was so beautiful. Those with the biggest hearts, do experience a lot of hurt, but I feel the gift of love is it's own reward. Fantastic write, quite touching!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/4/2016 3:08:00 PM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your beautiful touching comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/3/2016 12:40:00 AM
Dear...this truth is one that rings true in my heart as well. Often I have determined NOT to love because it brings pain, yet....the heart will not listen. I'm glad your mistake brings you peace. Congrats on POTD
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/3/2016 10:47:00 AM
God has given you a nice rhythmic heart so you can't live without loving. Thousand times' determinations are melted as the ice in hot or gold in too much hot. Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your comment and wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/2/2016 2:58:00 PM
It can indeed feel like the biggest mistake to love the wrong person. That is why over half the marriages fail. I like to think we are wrapping up past karma with that person before moving on, rather than thinking it is a mistake. Just my Polly Anna personality. Congratulations on having your profound poem featured as POTD BL! Blessings, Connie ; )
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/3/2016 9:14:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/2/2016 1:21:00 PM
BL, if "Love is the biggest mistake" then may we all make the biggest mistake every day of our existence! Thank you for this eye opener!!! :-)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/3/2016 8:46:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/2/2016 12:41:00 PM
Very interesting. Congrats and GL. :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/2/2016 1:09:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishing comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/2/2016 9:47:00 AM
i am hereby giving my heartiest thanks to our lovely Poetrysoup for choosing this poem for POTD. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/2/2016 8:16:00 AM
- Congratulations, dear Bl - A beautiful poem (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/2/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful comment with 7 and also for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/2/2016 6:57:00 AM
Well done loving friend. Congratulations BL on POTD honors...
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/2/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/2/2016 6:06:00 AM
Lovely write BL. It's never a mistake to love others, however it can be painful if you expect to get love in return. Congratulations on POTD.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/2/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/2/2016 3:15:00 AM
I love Victors comment...enjoyed this write of yours bl
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/2/2016 9:52:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

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