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My Best Pick Up Line

My best pick up line "The worst part about being strong is that no one ever asks if you are okay" Picked up May 3rd, 2015 For contest by Judy Konos

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/6/2015 7:43:00 AM

A very thoughtful approach.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/3/2015 11:53:00 PM

This is a terrible pick up line!!!!, its truthful, its poignant and its so me!!!! No wonder I am single!!!!! However you have said something here in a few words, that is far deeper than most could imagine, well in my view, thus why I loved it!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/6/2015 5:56:00 AM

Thnx Arthur! U r so very liberal with compliments n real kind to me!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2015 7:47:00 AM

I find this quite deep and sad - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/3/2015 9:18:00 AM

Thnx a lot Jan!