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My Best Friend

In one December night You changed my whole life You had no right You took what was mine to give You shattered my soul And left me to pick up the pieces How is a 14 year old supposed to put herself back together The worst thing is that i trusted you You gained my trust and stole it away In just one night Now what was once only nightmares Haunts my waking hours You crep from my dreams and became my reality Everytime i look in the mirror I see myself as damaged I see pieces of you rubbed into my skin. I tried to wash it away Try to cut you away, Try to exhale you with the smoke I cant get away Until She saved me Put me together piece by piece She pulled me from you Chipped you away with her love You are now nothing You hang out in my nightmares Waiting But you will not break her barrier She keeps you away She is my life preserver My savior My best friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/12/2016 10:21:00 PM
Danielle, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/6/2016 7:26:00 PM
Danielle, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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