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My Beloved Sweetheart

Affection and solicitude rises in my eyes, shaped into tears as fresh as dew, she was first and new, lays calm and motionless touch lost, ways parted, Best of moments passed as a flash of light, an absolutely unprofitable life, Rosy cheeks, glittery eyes, knee long silky hair, tall and perfect thin, why lay quiet ? Who provoked you ? Why been so impulsive to quit ? Did I mean a hurt That you harried? I drown deep into, love that's like suicide in river, prick of a thorn to body with no soul, love is still hung like a crystal before me, I can feel fragrance of your eternal breath, My beloved sweetheart ! Fire burns in my heart tranquilize, flowing emotions down my cheeks, pacify, My love, my inspiration, how could u take leave of, and leave me alone in world to suffer You ought to reply ! My beloved sweetheart ! written on 3/5/14 sponsor- Amy green

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Date: 5/29/2014 5:54:00 PM
Dr Upma,, Congratulations, in Amy's heartfelt contest for "Our Beloved, Sweetheart." RIP.... Love ~LINDA
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Dr.Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/28/2014 5:41:00 AM
Thnx Dr. Ram !
Date: 5/26/2014 6:25:00 AM
Lovely tribute to our beloved friend Linda-Marie, I guess she is happy reading this adorable poem. Congrats on winning this contest. (^_^) Noel
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/28/2014 5:41:00 AM
Thnx Noel ,, appreciate ur time !
Date: 5/26/2014 2:43:00 AM
This is beautiful, emotive and yet so sad. Congrats on your win. // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/26/2014 5:39:00 AM
Thanks for lovely comments n wishes Paul // upma//
Date: 5/3/2014 4:38:00 PM
Nice but so full of sadness, a tragic story but a good expressive work here, So full of emotion, i can feel for the person your writing about and reflect and identify with her very well at different times of my life when I've lost someone I've loved. cheri
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/6/2014 9:06:00 AM
Thanks for passing by cheri ! Losing someone u love is an irony ,, it's a wound on soul that never can heal !

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