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My Beloved

You are my sacramental palace, O queen, Domicile where my love have been Waiting. Would I guess your name, My dame, I will call you mine- If you lovingly could be keen To call me yours. I have seen And looked love in the blinking eye, You! My sacramental tarbanacle, dry Of complaint, soft like an infant's palm, Tender tendril of yam sprouting, sly So gracious that I gasp wryly, 'why?' Sagacious serpent gliding so high. To capture my soul and wean it Of hate. You career my heart beat Not with clinical vessel so slow. But with your voice smoothly knit In sequence of all of its heat A spectacle of a marveled kindred spirit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/18/2011 1:47:00 AM
I like this verse. I like the expressionist position you took in the poem. Also well used is the enjambment. Have a blissful day,bro
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:53:00 AM
Very impressive write, Onyebuchi
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Onyebuchi Okonkwo
Date: 11/14/2011 10:59:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Mehta for commenting...
Date: 11/13/2011 9:06:00 PM
very captivating.. Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..p.d.
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Onyebuchi Okonkwo
Date: 11/14/2011 12:11:00 AM
Thanks for the comment P.D.
Date: 11/13/2011 2:28:00 PM
u are awesome catie. why wldn't I read your poem? lots of love~ O.O.
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