My Bed

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My bed, the place I love the most in my small universe While in it, I am the perfect host I entertain and I converse There I can push the pain away And words are flowing freely Why not let me forever stay Where I so much wish to be? Aim is to fixate part of my back While strengthening the rest I know it's needed, but just YECK! I think, just let it rest, rest... So here I am, depressed they say But I say realistic But I'll give in to them either way Make them feel fantastic I close my eyes, no I don't sleep My words are flowing freely Unlike my tears, I only weep Online, on Soup, yeah... really.... Enjoy, oh readers of this whining ;)

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Dm Babbit

Date: 10/12/2016 11:20:00 AM

This is the stuff and place where dreams are made and perhaps, fulfilled. Nice write.

Darren White
Date: 10/12/2016 11:23:00 AM

Thank you so much, from the top mattress of my lovely bed :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2016 8:05:00 AM

If that is YOUR bed in the pic Darren you will have more than a bad back if you fall out of it! You need time to heal and if bed rest is ordered then that is what you must do :-) Keep the pen flowing and have a read of my poems - that will soon get you to sleep lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 10/12/2016 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Jan, nice bed, huh? :D Time to sleep, see you later!