My Bed

My bed. A well into which I am not climbing, but fell. My dread; that I should awake to a dream that is not sleeping, but Hell. For now I tread this path; alone with nothing; save this pale water and a lump of rock-hard bread.

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John Pen

Date: 5/8/2014 12:54:00 AM

Congrats on your poem being featured

Lisa Taylor

Date: 5/7/2014 3:42:00 PM

This poem really stuck out to me! i love it and now its one of my favorite poems

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/7/2014 10:54:00 AM

Hi Vincent, WOW!!!!!!!!!!! This was amazing it's all I can say. Except this; Sad thought provoking and outstanding... Thank you for sharing this write with us here. Congrats on this write being featured:~) Peace, Deborah

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/6/2014 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Vincent

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/5/2014 2:01:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Vincent :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2014 2:39:00 PM

Hi Vincent,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2014 2:45:00 AM

Vincent, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~