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My Beautiful Mare

Her beauty was beyond compare, As her mane blew in the wind. Her black coat, what a beautiful mare, A more beautiful mare, you could never find. She came to me when she was just a foul, When she was just a sprout. Her mother had died in a cave where men mined coal, She was trapped with around a dozen men and could not get out. I couldn't just leave her, I had to take her. I fed her milk and brushed her fur, I took good care of her. If only i had seen it coming, If only the truck could've stopped on a dime. I sat beside her dying body humming, Tears slowly appeared as i thought of an earlier time. Her beauty was beyond compare, As her mane blew in the wind. Her black coat, what a beautiful mare, A more beautiful mare, you could never find.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/28/2011 1:42:00 PM
Emily, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Emily Schaffer
Date: 7/3/2011 12:18:00 PM
thanks
Date: 6/23/2011 8:28:00 PM
Such a sad poem made beautiful by its haunting refrain. Like a sad song. Very nice .And congrats on your win.
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Emily Schaffer
Date: 7/3/2011 12:18:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/23/2011 4:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win Emily. Great story. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Emily Schaffer
Date: 7/3/2011 12:18:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/23/2011 1:45:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Emily
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Emily Schaffer
Date: 7/3/2011 12:18:00 PM
thanks
Date: 6/23/2011 12:56:00 PM
Congrats Emily on your excellent win in the hose contest with this exciting entry luv.. enjoy.. a great adventure of fond memories..
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Emily Schaffer
Date: 7/3/2011 12:19:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/23/2011 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Emily. Love, Carol
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Emily Schaffer
Date: 7/3/2011 12:19:00 PM
thanks and you're welcome
Date: 5/29/2011 12:58:00 PM
so enjoyed reading your creative poetry on this creature of the mare.. nice flowing lines to tell the tale..luv.,
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Emily Schaffer
Date: 7/3/2011 12:19:00 PM
thanks

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