Get Your Premium Membership

My Beautiful Dream

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Related image

And in my dream- I stand in a frozen woodland, the air is cold, quiet, the sky is black as ink; I wear a gorgeous red velvet cape quite grand. Branches hold up icicles that drip with a clink, my hair falls long and raven- like fluid divine; the air is cold, quiet, the sky is black as ink. And snow is falling like drifting crystals that shine, from afar, I hear the melody of a bell; my hair falls long and raven- like fluid divine. Before me is a black horse like a magic spell, on his neck, a red ribbon holds a bell-- tinkling; from afar, I hear the melody of a bell. Above, in the pretty night sky stars are twinkling, the snow a blizzard and we are lost in this dream; on his neck, a red ribbon holds a bell- twinkling. Above, in the pretty night sky stars are twinkling, and in my dream- I stand in a frozen woodland; the snow a blizzard and we are lost in this dream, I wore a gorgeous red velvet cape- quite grand. ______________________ February 14, 2017 Poetry/Terzanelle/My Beautiful Dream Copyright Protected, ID 17- 876-135-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Beautiful, Sponsor Silent One Second Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/17/2017 11:15:00 AM
Such a dreamy, night vision of beauty, BW. Wonderful imagery that elicits passionate feelings of romance. A jewel of a poem, dear. A 7 all night long. Love and hugs to you.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2017 7:17:00 PM
Freddie, thanks for the nice comment and the 7
Date: 2/17/2017 9:31:00 AM
Congrats well-done x
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2017 7:18:00 PM
Wendy thanks for the congratulations
Date: 2/14/2017 6:57:00 PM
Beautiful is right! Thank you for another fav.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/14/2017 7:57:00 PM
Sun thanks for the beautiful and fav
Date: 2/14/2017 6:03:00 PM
Truly beautiful! Good luck in the contest.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/14/2017 7:55:00 PM
Agnes Thank you for visiting
Date: 2/14/2017 5:29:00 PM
This is an incredibly beautiful poetic dream. Really nicely done.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 2/14/2017 7:54:00 PM
Chris thank you for the beautiful, appreciate

Book: Reflection on the Important Things