My Baby

Beautiful,smooth,so refine, I thank GOD, the day HE made you mine, Educated and street smart, My baby I love you, from the depth of my heart, Whenever I see you in my dream, I awake, feeling so refreshed and redeem. Over the years we have grown so close, We have jumped every hurdle, to reach the winning post, Sometime I pinch myself to see if this is real, Especially when I hug you, and you warmth I feel, Our relationship, I don't want it to end, You are my lover,my girl,my best friend...

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Terry Bass

Date: 7/28/2012 3:03:00 PM

Good right poetry is always better when written from the heart. Nice bro and also thank you for the comment on my poem Forever Love.

Richard Palmer
Date: 9/21/2012 6:05:00 PM

thanks Terry

Roberlynn Jones

Date: 6/26/2012 10:59:00 PM

nice poem

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/27/2012 7:17:00 AM

thanks Tarsha

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/19/2012 9:22:00 PM

Sweet write. Hang on to that lady.

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/20/2012 2:23:00 AM

thanks Vince

Ann Roske

Date: 6/11/2012 9:22:00 AM

Well Said Richard! Great tribute to your relationship.

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/11/2012 9:47:00 AM

thanks Ann

Karen Deeks

Date: 6/1/2012 12:24:00 AM

this deserves a 7 ... you took the reader down one path (well me at least) assuming this was a child but eventually you revealed the lady of your adoration.. lovely write richard ty karen

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/1/2012 6:13:00 AM

thanks Karen

Carma Sanderson

Date: 5/27/2012 7:25:00 AM

" AWe THis Is SWeet! Carma"

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/27/2012 9:27:00 AM

thanks Carma