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My Aunt's a Shrink

My aunt wanted me to write something espeacially for her,and as much as i like original's i prefer the second draft to this one: Maybe she's cool Maybe am a favourite neice Of a shrink of love and peace The cream To my fruit Exhausted samy Cant have the kids on mute Pasta sauce "It's mint,not meat" Shopping tour in rome In her tiny shrunken feet Ms.Riane A dumbfounded shrink And her neice Who can't attend the sink The shivering dutch trees And a mashamba me Will have in her heart Her favourite aunty (Mashamba:A swahelli word referring to someone who is not accustomed to something commenly known in the modern word)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/2/2009 3:41:00 AM
Interesting writing about your Aunt. Sara
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Date: 7/31/2009 3:12:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading that and also for the lesson. Got to read this again and again. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 7/30/2009 12:34:00 PM
so different, nice to experience a different cultural perspective! Light & Love
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