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My aspirations

Upon a splendid moon I placed a thought of you 
Not knowing where you’d rest 
A notion of likeness to be my vision bright and clear   
Although my ambitions that may be far fetched 
In the heart of desire I etched my dreams
To be well known from my words and lyrics
To be appreciated and genuinely admired  
As a poet and writer a teller of story 
For if this desire should be fulfilled 
I would be recklessly mad with optimism
I know now I shall never stop this vision 
This prayer, this hunger 
For if I do
I shall forget myself completely

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  1. Date: 3/23/2010 1:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Laura!! Great job...Listen, sorry about the soupmail error...Right now, I can't recall what he was aking..but I'll go over his letter and get back to you. I'll send it to your e-mail since neither his nor my SM works at times...Thanks....Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 3:04:00 AM
    Great write and congratulations on your winning this contest, Laura. (^_^) Noel.

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 2:05:00 PM
    Well done on your win Laura, its because of poets such as your self i am even in a top 10 place! Thanks. Gareth

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 1:21:00 PM
    Terrific piece of poetry Laura, and most deserved of your win in Carol's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 12:21:00 PM
    Oh, yes...I love this one Laura...a dream of each of us here, is to be appreciated and have the vision to write! Congratulations on this thoughtful poem and your win! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 12:05:00 PM
    Congratulations for your win, Laura. This is truly a beautiful dream. One we could all make...I suppose. I hope this dream comes true for you. Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 11:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Laura in my contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 7:44:00 AM
    Very well written poem. I enjoyed reading your poem this morning .HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY INDEED...

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 7:40:00 PM
    Laura I have to say this is the first free verse i have read, liked, and understood, u have the gift it takes to do this form and style well.. my attempts seem futile at best.. this is quite lovely Laura as u are.. appreciate your comments on my blog tonight.. getting to know each poet on a personal level building friendships.. thankxxx..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 7:36:00 PM
    Wow! What a great poetess you are, Laura! Splendid... brilliant work. Powerful ending... great job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 5:52:00 PM
    What a lovely flow of words. I enjoyed your poem. June Ellen

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 5:50:00 PM romatic is the passion of this sweeps one away! :) Lovely, Laura! ~ Carrie