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There I was an eight year old girl On an adventurous whirl We had a thing for hanging I ended up dangling With a driver that wanted to hurl these things happen when dramas befall I got stuck between the van and the wall out cold I was lying driver almost crying vans were forbidden, for fear of a sprawl *Naughty me, ended up unconscious from hanging onto the back of our neighbors’ van, poor man needed shock treatment, luckily I lived to tell the tale lol *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/21/2010 6:42:00 PM
poetry always finds a way to escape our mind and transform from our hearts slimming a tough life experience in even the slightest bit so others can enjoy our stories!..a great little tale!
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Date: 9/21/2010 5:28:00 PM
Thankxx Wilma for all your warm and welcome comments my dear friend.. hope all is well with u and u are happy.. with luv..
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Date: 9/20/2010 4:33:00 AM
I have no idea what Gert is saying below, but I enjoyed the poem!, crazy things we do in our youth !
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Date: 9/18/2010 5:48:00 AM
Wow, Wilma! moeilik om te glo dat jy regtig gebeur! Neem goeie sorg ... Gert:!)
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Date: 9/17/2010 11:28:00 AM
If I had been your mother I would be dead by now!! great fun - well done Liz
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Date: 9/16/2010 9:49:00 PM
well put. but daddies little girl deserved a spanking. jhl
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:33:00 AM
ahahaha so this was the write that you were talking about!! & haha glad to have taken part in confirming your craziness! and no dice on Zim dollars-- told you payment in form of Snickers would suffice ;) ttyl & hugs Siren
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Date: 9/16/2010 12:18:00 AM
GEEEZ, Wilma, what a risk taker. BE careful. hahaha. (and go to my blog pretty please!)
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Date: 9/15/2010 5:29:00 PM
A bad girl, didn't see that comming lol.. so glad I had time to read your work tonight...love Michael
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Date: 9/15/2010 1:22:00 PM
Hick! good night out? Hick. Nice one Wilma. I got so drunk once, my brother was driving me home and I had my head out the window throwing up. People thought it was a dog with it's tongue hanging out until they saw me close up
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Date: 9/15/2010 1:13:00 PM
OH Bad Wilma was out that day... luv this piece and in Limerick form too dear friend.. a true story of a mischevious one ...had some of those days myself and always got caught.. Mom was very stern ...haha..but it worked out well..in the end..luv.. enjoy your day and appreciate your wonderful warm welcome comments...too..
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Date: 9/15/2010 12:48:00 PM
Ouchy, glad your ok now Wilma >> James
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Date: 9/15/2010 10:56:00 AM
Dear Wilma, please never try doing this again! LOL You gave me smiles and I'm so glad you didn't get badly hurt. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/15/2010 10:52:00 AM
It's good you can laugh about it now, Wilma, but it does seem pretty dangerous. I was captivated, wondering what would happen to you. Diane
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Date: 9/15/2010 9:10:00 AM
It wasnt funny but it made me laugh...! BG
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Date: 9/15/2010 8:43:00 AM
Oh, oh! another "adventurous" one!! Thank goodness it turned out fine, Wilma. But I totally understand -it' the thrill. Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/15/2010 7:54:00 AM
Hello! Vans? VANS! You can't see over them. You can't see around them. They think they own the road, are invulnerable. Hope you are not a van-driver, Wilma. If you are, after such a near fatal accident, I suggest you be on the lookout for crazy van-drivers. Like your poem mucho. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/15/2010 7:21:00 AM
Good morning Wilma, not such a fun thing when hurt takes place. Well done on the limericks.. Nice comment and thanks for letting us know you where lucky. Enjoyed your poem,..p..d
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Date: 9/15/2010 6:57:00 AM
enjoyed these, Wilma. Harry
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Date: 9/15/2010 5:57:00 AM
glad you lived to share
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