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My Angel, My Mom

I'm here Standing still Looking into the clouds I close my eyes And take a deep breathe Sensing you near Feeling the warmth of the sun Against my skin Is like feeling The tight hugs You gave me when I was sad My heart is beating fast Not because I'm scared Not now Cause your love Is wrapped around me Like a snuggly blanket All nice and warm A tear falls down my cheek But it isn't of sorrow It's letting me know That your all right And you still love me So mom while your up there Please don't ever stop Being close by I can always be moved By your presence In my life Especially knowing every time a humming bird Flies pass me Watching the flowers grow bold and beautiful out in the field of flowers Now my mind and soul Can truly be at peace I will always love you Thank you for having me as your daughter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/3/2016 10:00:00 PM
Angie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2016 11:49:00 PM
Hi Angie, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.This poem is from ur heart & it connects me directly with my heart. Enjoyed every stanza.......with love.
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Date: 4/30/2016 8:52:00 PM
A loving write , special gift for mother's day. Angie,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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