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My Angel

I met a girl once, whom i taught not to cry. I found freedom in her arms And silent promises in her eyes... She asked nothing, I gave nothing... She bared her soul to me, She showed me her vulnerabilities. I tried hard to see,but under those fragments, But I could only see her strength. As she moved back into the shadows, I could only see her light burning bright. I thought I was strong.. She showed me what strength was! As I struggled to find where I belong, She answered me with a kiss.. " To love is... to give yourself And to keep giving." She took my hand in hers, Looked me in the eye, And, as i laid down my defences She taught me to fly.. Ans as she taught me to fly, I found my freedom in her arms, I found my identity in her eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/20/2011 1:11:00 PM
really touching......
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Date: 3/29/2009 2:18:00 AM
I like the way you use light and shadow in this piece...it reminds me of a prose poem I just wrote titled: Family...check it out! I like this a lot...very intimate tone you've created.
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Date: 3/4/2009 9:10:00 PM
"I found my identity in her eyes." i really love this !! i hope i'll have someone like what you've described someday.
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Girish Gokul
Date: 8/20/2011 3:02:00 PM
Hope so too. I married her and am happy as can be! All the best buddy.
Date: 2/28/2009 1:44:00 PM
Garish, great poem, and I liked your definition of love "to give yourself and to keep giving." Well stated! Carolyn
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