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A destiny that became an escapade There I was caught up in a whirl pool But could not see I was being played How could I have then been such a fool And her the way she would mascerade Anyone would think she's at some ball Feeling angry but then more so betrayed The fact I let her make me feel so small And how dose he then keep up the facade When one's knocked off there pede stool This memorrie that never seems to fade Her so smug but him thinking hes so cool Though what a silly mistake that I'd made To think that I was now giving her my all What would have happed if he had stayed Perhaps in future I will learn to walk tall Why did I write this I feel like Ive took exerts from othetr writes like a bad case of nostalgia and broken With this just a nother interpretasion tring to get off this subject not sure on couple of verses if eveade or stayed would have been better lost intrest half way through you decide give some tips if like WRITTEN 2012 BY DAVIDSCOTT,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, if ANY OTHER MEMVERS COULD HELP ME WITH THIS LOST MY WAT A BIT WITH IT VERSE 3 AND 4 INSPIERD BY ALL THE COOL POETS ON SOUP NOTE OTHER WRITES IN THIS PATTERN 1 ATTRIBIUTES 2 KALIDOSCOPE 3 WONDERER 4 IN STILLS 5 WORDS 6 SORROW 7MOODS 8 VITAGE

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Date: 9/3/2013 10:28:00 AM
Hi David, you are fine the way you are... giving it your all takes a lot from you... enjoyed the poem...Linda
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Date: 7/4/2013 2:14:00 PM
There's uncertainty at the end, yet hope. This was deep, David. I wish you the best in all that you do. You express yourself very well. I appreciate your verses tremendously. Can relate too. Always, Laura
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