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My Achilles

PHFFFT! * The sound of peace A sweet release To La La lands Where soothing hands Calm the weary Boost the dreary Drown my sorrow Until tomorrow When once again I'll wake and then PHFFFT! *This represents the sound of a beer bottle being opened

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/22/2010 4:42:00 PM
I actually DID laugh out loud! I love it!
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:18:00 PM
Very creative and interesting write My Achilles, Darrin
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:09:00 PM
wow ! Finally a short slam,, sure enjoyed yor word, here, lol,, to the sound of you drinking everyday,, well as the poem,goes,, enjoyed,..Miss P.D.
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