My Very Sweet Love - the Hotan Style

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~My Very Sweet Love~ (Hotan Linked ) Here I am my sweet love Love, I'm waiting here for you You mean the whole world to me Me and you You're here in my heart Heart, mind, soul Soul and heart loves you You're all I want, I long for For you I dream of. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2016 March.03.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain ~Author's Notes: The Hotan is a Japanese poetry form or style.The Hotan gets its name for being a combination of a Haiku (hokku = ho) and a Tanka (tan).

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Chris Green

Date: 4/3/2017 3:12:00 PM

Really nicely done, I had seen this form of poem before and you did a fantastic job with it expressing love and affection linked, as those two terms should be.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/3/2017 5:38:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Chris, for stopping by once again and commenting so beautifully here on my love poem and for your very generous 7.I deeply appreciate it all:)). Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)) D