Mutuality

Long lasting marriage- love..a care-free zone

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Sharon Winter

Date: 11/17/2008 10:19:00 AM

And what a gift it is. What a write it is! So perfectly stated! Lucky , lucky to truly appreciate this poem. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/17/2008 7:04:00 AM

So well said, Brian. I often feel like I take it too much for granted, yet what a blessing it is to feel so comfortable in a marriage that you can simply "know" that all is well. I really love this little poem...It says all that needs to be said. Very well done! Carrie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 11/17/2008 5:52:00 AM

I agree with everyone else, this offers hope and in todays world of disposable marriages that's an awesome thing. Very well written. Michael

Daver Austin

Date: 11/17/2008 5:09:00 AM

If I read you right, I totally agree, this after 57 years with the same woman. Deep, good, good write. Love, daver

Michael Torres

Date: 11/17/2008 12:16:00 AM

Wonderful word's that are becoming extinct with the divorce rate and the self centeredness of this world. You have to have hope though. Michael kTorres