Musk

the power of scent the fragrance of mother earth... seduction in mind Entered Musk Poetry contest Sponsor Anthony Biaanco 26/1/2023

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 2/23/2023 11:07:00 AM

A little too "earthy" for my taste, but it works quite well in this piece, Harry. BOL in the contest.

Michael Tor

Date: 2/5/2023 4:28:00 PM

Lovely Harry well done my friend...

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/5/2023 11:10:00 AM

Instantly to mine faves Harry! you know I stole that saying from our dear friend Ruben who's not been here for yrs now...again Instantly I think of my community garden plot I return to every yr, can't wait till May! beans, herbs, tomatoes, squash, sunflowers & more! & one of my fave scents!

Deb M

Date: 2/1/2023 11:20:00 PM

Lovely Harry…Debx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/1/2023 7:49:00 AM

What an excellent Senryu, unfortunately the can be's will always seduce mother earth, for greed is the only thing , the scent of power and money, which circles in their sad lives and loveless, hearts, pure and unadulterated selfishness. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Ann Peck

Date: 1/31/2023 5:01:00 PM

Beautiful, Harry!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/28/2023 12:48:00 PM

I do love the fragrance of the earth after a rain storm, it seems so fertile, promising a new birth, a fresh chance~

Jim Slaughter

Date: 1/27/2023 10:49:00 AM

Musk is a bit too "earthy" for my taste, Harry, but I do like this piece. I cannot, however, for the life of me, understand what Connie P. finds "seductive" about Elon Musk...!! BOL in the contest.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/26/2023 2:25:00 AM

there is nothing more aromatic than a spring shower when the leaves are budding. I have a plum tree which, funnily, don't laugh at me, I talk to and. I love the aroma around it when I do. I am sure she gives me more juicy plums because of it.