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Musings of Mother

"I shall be telling this with a sigh" Robert Frost My thoughts they roil like waters dark in the abyss of blackest night with memories of mother’s book marks of Longfellow read by lamp light. She called in the room around me the patter of other small feet, her gentle voice fetched angels Oh, rhymes how they astounded me like lullabies soft and so sweet. All fearsome shadows, she’d dispel Maxine, my queen read Tennyson and the Charge of the Light Brigade a little girl dreamt of caissons roll and thunderous cannonades. To be so brave the small child mused mother’s small, precious, heroine what would it take to stand so strong without father, and not confused What words where the linchpin to right mother’s tell tale wrong. Such sad inspiration*.. mother but a champion you were born. You’re adored before all others yet, tears bring memories forlorn. So, dreams stream on of Mother Goose three kittens and their mittens. My visions of your fleeting smile return almost every night, and your spirit comforts, lightens sights, if only for a little while.

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Date: 10/9/2012 12:49:00 PM
As always a great write. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/8/2012 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Debbie on your first place...yes, your mother was your inspiration. She read you the poems of Longfellow and the book of Mother Goose by making you dream and sigh as Robert Frost wrote. Thus, from listen to the poetry and stories she read to you, she ignited the spark to make you a great poetess. I have enjoyed reading the moving Ode to your mother...she is very deserving, and may I say: a great woman indeed. Have a blessed day and smile. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 10/8/2012 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Patricia's "You Are My Inspiration" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2012 10:00:00 AM
CONGRATS DEBBIE .. U R NUMBER ONE AGAIN AND SO WELL DESERVED .. THIS IS SO GRAND A WRITE LUV ..
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Date: 10/8/2012 9:06:00 AM
I have only just begun to read other poets. For so long I was afraid they would taint my work, change it somehow. That I would not be 'me' in my own poems. Now I have learned that reading other poets can inspire me and I still stay me. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/8/2012 12:40:00 AM
wow!! fantastic poem friend Debbie..Big congratulations on your win!! cheers!!
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Date: 10/7/2012 11:54:00 PM
Just beautiful Debbie! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/7/2012 5:03:00 PM
Master piece!.Wow!this is splendid and wonderful.You are a dexterous lady..Congrats on your superb win,Debbie....Light and love...
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Date: 10/7/2012 11:31:00 AM
This is so beautiful Debbie. Congratulations on it garnering first place.
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:47:00 AM
so well deserved a win. Congrats, Debs.
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Date: 10/26/2011 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Any Mother Poem" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2011 3:05:00 PM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent tribute. Nice going. Enjoyed. luv Ralph
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Date: 10/24/2011 11:40:00 PM
One of the best, Debs. Great writing and congrats on the winners list. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/24/2011 9:05:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on a wonderful win with this tremendous write luv.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 10/24/2011 6:14:00 PM
Beautiful writing Debbie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:24:00 AM
Many congratulations Debbie on making it to first round of winners in International Poetrysoup contest. Winning wishes for the final round. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:01:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on having two poems entered make it to first round competition in PS contest..G.L. luv..
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Date: 8/3/2011 2:06:00 PM
Congrats, Debbie, on all your selections. Love, daver
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Date: 8/2/2011 8:57:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your ode being featured and congrats on the three finalist poems. Good luck. Vince
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry x3 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Debbie. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:05:00 AM
Debbie, Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/2/2011 8:38:00 AM
lovely memories laced with both happiness of good times together and sadness that she's gone. congratulations on your poem being featured this week.
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2011 8:20:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with us all with luv...
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Date: 1/10/2011 3:50:00 PM
mother's love is something to be cherished and you have well depicted that here
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