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Musings of Luis

If i shut my eyes and refuse to move If i fold my hands and refuse to write If i close my mouth and refuse to talk If i do will you still whisper in my ear That you still love me that you care Will you still give me that hug and kiss Or will you desert me and blame it Then blame it on the absent moose Will you look me straight in the eye And tell me suck it up Luis Get up and do your thing Or will you cuddle besides me And keep me warm Promising me a better tommorow

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Date: 5/17/2016 2:04:00 AM
Keep writing and talking, Lewis. Anything that brings people, of all races and nations, together as one has to be a good thing...Keep on writing. My best regards...and warmest wishes. :) john
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 6/7/2016 2:13:00 AM
Thank you John.. i will.. ;-)
Date: 2/27/2016 1:02:00 AM
thanks :) Good night. LINDA
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Date: 2/24/2016 9:40:00 PM
Lewis, a sweet write... LINDA
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 2/26/2016 1:00:00 PM
Thank you Linda.. //hugs & blessings
Date: 2/21/2016 9:50:00 AM
Love it! Such good musings ... CayCay
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 2/21/2016 9:56:00 AM
Thank you CayCay.. for the lovely comment

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