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"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" John Ruskin, 1853 ~*~ Away from all the city's noise my body sinks into the marsh; as birdsong trills of whispered hymn I slide away among the trees. My reveries in forest deep are well concealed and hid from view-- with jazmines pinned on hair, and then disperse like fringes in a breeze. While my voice hushes, quite profound I trace northwinds, balmy and strong when evening spreads its velvet cloak-- and muffles any wail or blare. Here I dream of family's lore the Sunday feasts, the mourn of deaths beyond the place where moonlight glints, where field of life drifts...warm and still. All the Little Pieces Contest Sponsor: Constance La France 8/31/2020

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Date: 9/25/2020 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette, on your win. "Birdsong trills of whispered hymn...." just gorgeous. I love this poem. It's a fav!
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Date: 9/24/2020 4:28:00 PM
Hello Nette, this is a beautifully done poem. Ireadit and enjoyed the poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 9/10/2020 3:27:00 AM
Nette this is so beautiful....I love Jasmine flowers and often do the same....much love:)
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Date: 9/10/2020 2:21:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my challenge, All the Little Pieces with this excellent write _Constance
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Date: 9/4/2020 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Enjoy your win and day.................
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Date: 9/4/2020 4:17:00 AM
- A lovely and sensitive poem, Nette :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/4/2020 3:10:00 AM
Soft and endearing, Nette, congratulations on top win:)
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Date: 9/1/2020 6:18:00 AM
You chose your pieces well. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/1/2020 5:23:00 AM
So beautifully worded and the imagery here is great. Love the pic. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/1/2020 3:56:00 AM
Oh...beautifully written Nette. I am near the forests. I think I will keep this as a Fav. I hope all is well. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 8/31/2020 11:54:00 PM
A wonderful poem for the forest. I liked the tone of the words and how you described your thoughts. I love the lakes and the forest. Perfect place to gather our senses.
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Date: 8/31/2020 3:51:00 PM
Your poem dwells in powerful emotions, Nette..A hush so low, and quite profound...and muffles any tone of blare..
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