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My first conscious breath of the day seems an effort. I must rise and do it all over again. My cheek is cold on the window pane as I watch the mist rise over the pond. The geese are announcing their flight path. A few more tomorrows and I will be a winter woman. The sun barely rising over my horizons. My memories slip through my fingers like quicksilver. I touched his hand, and perhaps his heart, for a moment. That warmth has faded and will not sustain my soul for long. The wood mouse hurries across the yard and hides under a stack of old lumber. It was meant for a spring arbor, but I know flowers will never bloom there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/30/2009 7:19:00 PM
another fine write! Barbara! you allow the reader to muse on their own! cool! jimbo
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Date: 8/30/2009 4:05:00 AM
Barbara this poem is very well written and oh so sad - It has an emptiness that just seems to hang above the reader like a giant balloon that is waiting to burst - Very well done - God Bless, mj
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:38:00 AM
Super narrative Barbara>>James
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Date: 8/28/2009 7:27:00 PM
Memories are golden, God Bless, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/28/2009 5:26:00 PM
The deep sadness this poem imparts....comes like the chill in the weather....brings with it that somber feeling of dark skies. What a great piece of expression this is. ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:56:00 PM
Interesting thoughts about life and death put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:42:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Barbara. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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