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Music of the Night

I searched for you Followed in the wake of your song The sillage of your sensual scent Long after the sun had lost its glow I persisted, with cards in hand, Defying destiny, undeterred By night and melancholy darkness. -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- “On Broadway” Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Placed 1st © 27th June, 2020

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/10/2020 6:14:00 PM

A magnificent write, Paul. Follow the music... :)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/12/2020 10:19:00 AM

Thank you, Angela. A pleasure to have you stopping by:) Regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 10/12/2020 5:13:00 AM

so pleased - but not surprised at all - to see this was a big winner. Excellent write, as always, my friend

Paul Callus
Date: 10/12/2020 8:40:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. You are too kind, my friend. Regards // paul

James Inman

Date: 8/25/2020 6:13:00 PM

Never Give Up! The search goes on Paul. A wonderful write.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/26/2020 12:29:00 AM

Thank you, James. Pleased to be sharing first place with you:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2020 2:47:00 PM

wow, so soulful and romantic. Congrats. Just love this.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/26/2020 12:18:00 AM

I love your reaction and comments, Andrea...thank you!! Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/24/2020 10:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your pen had another wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day....................

Paul Callus
Date: 8/24/2020 3:06:00 PM

That's very kind of you, Paula...thank you. Have a lovely day. Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/23/2020 12:28:00 PM

Paul, congratulations on your first place win. I love the phrase "in the wake of your song!" Brilliant imagery.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/23/2020 12:43:00 PM

Thank you, Sam! I have read your winning entry...beautiful! Regards // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/15/2020 7:45:00 PM

Hello Paul ... you most certainly have a way about writing this topic in poetry. Very nice indeed - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 7/16/2020 10:27:00 AM

Thank you, Lindsay. Your words are most encouraging. Regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 7/10/2020 2:54:00 PM

sad but very beautiful

Paul Callus
Date: 7/10/2020 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, my friend! Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/4/2020 10:17:00 AM

A romantic poem Paul and your images you create are etched with deep emotion. I'm certain Nette will love this write and best wishes, although I hardly feel you need them. Warm regards and hugs, Jenny.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2020 11:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jenny. Your comments and faith you show are truly appreciated. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/30/2020 11:57:00 AM

Ahhhh, another piece that lets the imagination wander creating a romantic scene in the minds eye Paul. Lovely! Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2020 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Connie. I often like to leave some things hanging in mid-air, then letting the reader come to his/her own conclusions. ~ Warm regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/30/2020 9:48:00 AM

Beautifully written Paul :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2020 11:52:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it, Heidi...thank you...and please excuse the late reply! Hope you are feeling much better after your ordeal :) Warm regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 6/29/2020 1:57:00 PM

I love the word sillage, Nothing stops you when you are determined, Very nicely penned John, best wishes..

Paul Callus
Date: 7/3/2020 4:31:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Best regards // paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/29/2020 8:58:00 AM

An emotional write Paul with a hint of romance. Good luck in the contest Tom

Paul Callus
Date: 7/3/2020 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. Best regards // paul

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 6/28/2020 7:13:00 AM

Brief and restrained, yet with great impact. Masterful wordcraft, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/28/2020 10:27:00 AM

Your feedback is also impactful, Lawrence...thank you! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/28/2020 6:46:00 AM

Tender emotions, lovingly, longingly displayed--

Paul Callus
Date: 6/28/2020 10:25:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. You sure hit on the right emotions! Regards // paul

Sand Blown

Date: 6/27/2020 6:45:00 PM

well written....yes...favorite music.... makes/lets me see reality with a smile from a perspective of logic...see odds : ) that signify (what are called) the irrational and transcendental numbers that describe what is known as/called time.....we are a manifestation of time ….a rollercoaster....at night....no lights....only the effect...or what's called reality mind dream.....stan sand …..got carried away again (no!.....not dead yet : )

Paul Callus
Date: 6/28/2020 5:25:00 AM

Thank you for such a pleasant visit, Stan. I can tell you like music (especially after having just read your poem Isolation Music). Best regards // paul

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/27/2020 6:43:00 PM

Paul, this is really strong. Wonderfully penned by poet friend. GL in the contest...

Paul Callus
Date: 6/28/2020 5:15:00 AM

Thank you, Jeanne. A pleasure to have you visiting. Regards // paul