Music of the Clock

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Ticky, Ticky, Ticky Toc Ticky, Toc I lay here in bed Listening to that grinding music of the clock Ticky, Ticky, Ticky Toc Ticky, Toc Oh, please let the slumber come Ticky, Ticky, Ticky Toc Ticky, Toc Where’s the morning sunrise Ticky, Ticky, Ticky Toc Ticky, Toc Ten till six, it’s almost time to get up Ticky, Ticky, Ticky Toc Ticky, Toc ZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzZzzzzzzzzzz By eve roper 10/25/2014 A Repetition

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/27/2014 2:14:00 AM

It's those mundane noises that really get me to fall asleep quick! Cute poem. Getting up at ten 'till six doesn't sound like very much fun, however.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/27/2014 8:13:00 AM

Thank you again Timothy, the fan and my air purifier in my room, and the birds outside my window are what lullabies me to sleep. :) eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/26/2014 12:03:00 PM

Snooze alarm time!! I hate that ticky tock sound. My alarm clock is the windup kind and it is in my closet because I can't sleep hearing its loud sound. I always wake up before it wakes ME up. My dang body won't let me sleep past six hours any more!!! I enjoyed this , Eve.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/26/2014 12:34:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for reading my write, I have gotten use to the clock, but like you my body also wakes me up before the alarm goes. loves and hugs :) eve