Music

by shade of night the what i am sings flows along so easily i am music

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/31/2016 9:48:00 AM

Oh, I do think you are classical music! Solo, or part of a wondrous medley of musical instruments; you will always out-shine, Daver! I should be writing other comments, but today is magical Tuesday! It's fun to pick one day out of seven, to head out to find something new and wonderful. My day starts with reading this, THANK YOU! Keep well, and have a magnificent day! Hugs and more hugs, Mikki :)

Daver Austin
Date: 5/31/2016 9:59:00 AM

You are such a love. You are music. Love and hugs, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/30/2016 9:58:00 PM

Daver, WOW, now that's a tanka that makes a statement. Love it... Love LINDA

Daver Austin
Date: 5/31/2016 10:09:00 AM

Looking at your face - you are music. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2016 1:17:00 PM

I really love this one of yours, Daver, and especially knowing how important music is to you. How many cats are you up to now?

Daver Austin
Date: 5/31/2016 10:34:00 AM

As cats go, it seems we're never less than 9. At present we have 10 and one intruder who manages to sneek in from time to time.Love, daver

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2016 9:33:00 AM

beautiful tanka Daver I have never tried the modern format in fact I've not written many tanka at all:-) hugs Jan xx

Daver Austin
Date: 5/30/2016 10:22:00 AM

At 86 my writing comes in short spurts for short lengths of time. Nowadays Tanka is written in all sorts of ways. Our traditional way is convenient because one has a few more words to use. Love, daver